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Why didn't I think of this sooner! Just hit the download button and you will have the complete Mind of a Hero Quintet, a.k.a. The Crack. That's right, folks. No more e-mailing me and waiting for me to get my shit together to send the rest of the story to you. It's all here!

Eventually I want to post the whole thing, but until then please enjoy this compendium.

More "Danny Phantom" stories: [link]

A complete list of my fanfiction: [link]
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quietimaginations Featured By Owner Edited May 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so so much for your determination and focus in writing this AMAZING fic till the finishing line! I love your DP Crack fic collections here! Thank you for writing and sharing them with us all Love Heart :happybounce: 

PS: I found your work on AO3 first :D (Big Grin)  I'm glad I looked through the past treasure chest inside there La la la la :happybounce:

***EDITED COMMENT [REVIEWS + SPOILERS]***

Alright, so I managed to finish the first crack series for DP, which is "The Heart of A Hero", plus, after finishing that, I went ahead and did myself a favor of continue my reading to the first few chapters of the second DP crack series, "Role Reversal".

I really, really, really liked how "The Heart of A Hero" was done. Like, my heart fluttered in complete HAPPINESS in reading ALL THROUGHOUT this first crack series, that I had to thank god for bringing this fate of me find this fic after digging through AO3 and all that!

But. I am, how to say this, a bit "slightly" or  maybe a bit "too much" slightly disappointed, with how things seem to go around starting in the second DP crack series, and even the proceeding crack series after that (I took a few pokes and prods jumping from chapter to chapter to see how the rest of the crack went, after following the second crack for a few chaps. Sorry, I'm just like that.)

I dunno I guess I was hoping a bit too much in the first crack series (and yes,! They delievered VERY WELL!!!), and automatically the other later series as well, and when the later ones didn't deliver this time around as I hoped they did with "The Heart of A Hero", I couldn't help but feel letdown with how it turned out. till the end. And I guess I should have taken the word "crack" a bit more seriously as it is what it is, haha! But nevertheless, I still wanna thank this author for her obvious unwavering determination in writing her fics and see them finished to the end of it. And for that too, I truly appreciate her works, even if I don't really like how the story goes in the second crack for this DP crack series, and even the ones after (they follow the same story perspective, and seem to stuck to that role until the end of the crack series..).

All in all, I will give this DP Crack Series a 4 STARS, just because of the uniquely creative first part of the DP crack series, "The Heart of A Hero". Really loved this one! :D (Big Grin) 
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maltese101 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh man. I'm finished reading through the whole thing...

And wow. Just wow. Part 5 is really intense and I love the ending. A really good way to end it :)

This is.. a one of a kind Pompous Pep story. I like that very much, thank you for writing this amazing story! :D
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

Part 5 in particular was very fun to plot and to write. I saw an opportunity to really run with some ideas- I wanted to make it a hell of a ride. It makes me so happy that you liked it.
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Mpreg48 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist
.... I just wanted to thank you for providing with one awesome fucking amazing story... and also not getting enough sleep on a school night jk!
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My apologies for thwarting your scholastic endeavors- and my thanks for your comment. I'm very happy you enjoyed it!
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Mpreg48 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist
yes it is so amazing! I am quite happy that my scholastic endeavors were thwarted! It has brought much joy to my life!!! Haha I cant wait to finish the story, I am on the fourth story!
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ooo, you're not done with the fic? Allow me a moment for an evil grin. ;)
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Mpreg48 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist
haha yes enjoy your evil grin! But I am sure, Ill be done by tonight!
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D Still enjoying it.
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Mpreg48 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist
haha of course I know I would!
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brandy212 Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
Thank you; both for posting this and writing it :heart: I've ready up to chapter 20 in Role Reversal so far, and I'm completely hooked. This is just... amazing. I love this story :D Cant wait to see what comes next!
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It gives me great pleasure to say that you're welcome. Thank you so much for reading! I hope you enjoy the rest. :)
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PrincessBetty1 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
@_@ Did you know it took me almost a week to read the entire thing!?

Honestly, I fell in love with everything! The irony, the curiosity, the intense, the unexpected, and everything involved! Of course, I laughed when Madison pointed out Hogwarts and THAT made my day! :love: Seriously, I read up to the end and wondering what will be of Vlad and Danny now, other than expecting upcoming, :giggle:

I seriously did not see ANYTHING coming and felt really into it. I laughed, I gasped, upset, shocked, and somewhat unexpected tears! :heart:
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I believe you! I wrote a monster. I'd really like to recapture the writing stamina I had when working on the Crack.

My heartfelt thanks to you for leaving this comment. My big dream for this project was to inspire delight, excitement, and maybe (oh, who am I kidding, definitely!) some emotional turmoil. I'm very glad you enjoyed my story! :heart:
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PrincessBetty1 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
(: Well, keep it up! I just think it's a perfect story to read and boy, the way Vlad and Danny were, perfect! Magnificent writing!

You are very welcome and I'm glad you poured into a monstrous and insane emotional story you had going! I definitely did enjoyed it!

Seriously, I do look forward for more continuation or anything of your work! I like your style and captured my attention the most. I believe you had me going for the week so much!
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's been... just about long enough for "Danny Phantom" give me a sense of nostalgia (I was into the series while it was still in production) since I wrote the Crack. I'm happy that I feel a sense of completion with this project, which is not what I can say for every fandom I've touched. (I have about five stories dangling and whether or not I eventually finish any of them is anyone's guess, although I am starting to actively work again on one of them.) My sig has links to lists of my work if you're curious, including a few more "Danny Phantom" pieces. :)
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lizoftheinfinite Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
OKAY. I read through entire thing, and now I feel obligated to review it.
So.
You are awesome.
The actual writing itself is meh, workable, although you definitely improve as time progresses (and not to say I wasn't pleased with it; you have solid grammar and fluid sentence structure, this is just nitpicking). So your prose is pretty good.
But the PLOT. OH GOD THE PLOT.
erghbfstj adhhfdhdfhdsfkhsj
</incoherent keyboard smashing>
It is good. Fast-paced. Intense. Dramatic. I hate mpreg. I really, really hate mpreg. But this . . . GAH. WHY?
The tension between Danny and Vlad is gasp-worthy. The drama is real without being overworked. Your action scenes are fluid and rapid.
Everything is just . . . so perfect. TT_TT
I read it all in one afternoon without stopping. I blew off all my homework too, gah.
But it was worth it.
So. Keep writing. Get published some day! I believe in you.
YeahI'mdonenowgoodjobyou'reawesome-
-liz
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. I'm not sure what to say, except... thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it (and despite the MPreg- I'm tickled pink at that). You made my day. So thank you for reading and for taking the time to tell me your thoughts. :)
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KiraNinja Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011
I just got to Part 3 and I was wondering, is it just the one part? Or is there more of part 3 I'm missing?
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NightshadeQS Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010  Student General Artist
Yes! I can't wait to read the rest of it~!
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
^^ Enjoy!
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inu-dan Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010   Interface Designer
Can you give me steps to read the rest?
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AmericanGirl88 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I really wanna read this but I don't have microsoft word! What do I do? D:
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
They're all .doc files. Other programs should be able to open them, including Open Office. You may even be able to find a .doc viewer that isn't a word processor if you try Google.
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199592 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010  Student
I cant find it ;( im at Chapter Twenty how do i download ?!?
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Click the download file button and it will give you the zip.
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199592 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010  Student
No wait i....i did it YES
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MILKthyMELLOcow Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
wait wha o.o
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Yes?
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MILKthyMELLOcow Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
?
er hello ^-^
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Snow-Kitten-88 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2009
LOL... Finally! The Crack without all the emails and attachments xD
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
A new world order is at hand, they claim.
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anthiena Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2009
HURRAY! This series is teh sh!t.
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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You-Were-Snarked Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2009
Now the whole world will know about The Crack. It isn't a mystery anymore. And easy to find. Anyone who hasn't checked them out...Do. I mean. It'll be one of the best things you ever read. I literally spend two days straight in front of the computer just reading it. Once you start, you just can't stop.
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Once you start, you just can't stop.

So, it's like Pringles? (Damn you, Pringles!) Wait. Did I just forget my own drug metaphor?

:hug:
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You-Were-Snarked Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2009
I'm not kidding. I actually didn't eat, sleep, or do anything while reading this. (Back whenever you sent it.) I was in a trance. Heck, I may have scared my mother over it. It was just...As if some divine being was opening up the world to me in a new way. I was enlightened. And this isn't even me being flattering. Oh no. I feel a little pathetic for actually feeling that way. Just...Wow.

Pringles? The chips do that to you? Hmm...I say it depends on what flavor. If it's the original...Then heck yeah!

:hug:
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I feel like I should apologize. If that's not hyperbole, I'm immensely flattered. And if it is hyperbole, I still am.

Pringles are just damn addictive. I don't eat potato chips much, so when I do eat them I don't expect the taste (if that makes any sense) and I think that makes me more tempted to binge on them. (I'm good about not buying junk food. But when the 'rents get it or someone brings it into work, I have to show restraint.)

:hug:
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You-Were-Snarked Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2009
I wish I was over exaggerating. But no reason to apologize! I enjoyed the ride. =)

Ah, I know what you mean. I'm like that with chocolate. I try not to eat so much of it. Then Halloween and Christmas comes...And then I can't stop after one bite.

:hug: times 2
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neoyi Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WHOO! Now ALL of them can enjoy the insanity!
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, yes indeed.
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E-Dantes Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2009
So cool!! Thanks, that's what I needed!! :D
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure to oblige.
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saisaka Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2009
Yes! I've been wanting to get the rest of the story for a while now, but I thought if I emailed you I would lose it or it would be deleted, I'm glad you put it all up. :)
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Good! I'm glad this helps you. :)
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unknown20troper Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2009
Thanks for the story!

Great Timmy/Crocker slash on InsaneJournal!
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoy it.
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unknown20troper Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2009
Are there any other good Timmy/Crocker fanfics in existence?
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TavalyaRa Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Not sure. There must be. I've never sought them out, just written them.
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unknown20troper Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2009
Oh. I haven't seen any on FF.Net or on fopslash yet.
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